So many people don't know about my life
so i'm gonna tell you what it's like
the farthest part that i can remember
is when i was 4 in september
i always played with different things
just like that one time i played with my ding-a-ling
then i was 5 and i felt more alive
i also so cool because i was going to school
then i felt sad when it ended
but at least i got perfect attendence
then i was 6 and i got so crazy
i asked a girl out and she said maybe
then as you know it i am 7
and i'm learnin about a place called heaven
so now im 8 and i'm startin to hate
9,10,11 still learnin about heaven
many people think i hate myself
abused at 6
or molested at 12
so then 13 and in my heart i am hurting
so finally comes 14 that's my age now
you better get out of my face before i hit you "pow"
i never thought i would have some time
to write some of my life in one rhyme.
Posted at 12:26 pm by mr22
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Omar March 20, 2005 09:04 PM PST
Hey Danny. I just love your Poem. Hope after I get you satisfied You can make a poem for me. And hoping you'll make a poem about our little something something together and putting it into your website. Love You. Big Pappa.
Always,
Omar
"Exotic Flower" |
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Sue. March 5, 2005 03:07 PM PST
You gusy are lame, you dont flame someone's blog with comments. But Danny... you really should add another entry. |
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shera March 1, 2005 07:52 PM PST
danny, make more entries, or else they're gonna cut ur head off! |
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-.Kenneth.- February 20, 2005 07:55 PM PST
Danny your gay, you wierdo LOL=Laughing out loud... Freak is in the house, LOL... |
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cusisaid sooooo February 12, 2005 03:01 PM PST
danny ur gay |
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Sue. February 10, 2005 04:27 PM PST
Wow Danny, lol That was good! |
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